tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post5556710181436844678..comments2024-03-08T20:57:04.360-08:00Comments on JESSICA THERRIEN: Campaign Game #2 - First or Favorite PostJessica Therrienhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-40703151063272883772011-09-05T21:08:41.375-07:002011-09-05T21:08:41.375-07:00Thanks for playing everyone! I really enjoyed read...Thanks for playing everyone! I really enjoyed reading all of your posts :) Good luck in your 200-word challenge.Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-29733104383348808642011-09-05T17:31:47.279-07:002011-09-05T17:31:47.279-07:00Great idea. You are a great facilitator!
What an ...Great idea. You are a great facilitator!<br /><br />What an amazing story about the conference and meeting the right person (and having a great 20 pages). It shows, it only takes one person to love it. Thanks for the reminder.<br /><br />My first post: http://depressioncookies.blogspot.com/2011/09/revisiting-beginning.html<br /><br />Now to focus on my 200 words...Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-43592134748703117022011-09-05T11:18:41.874-07:002011-09-05T11:18:41.874-07:00Susan,
I love this post! Congratulations! I'...Susan,<br /><br />I love this post! Congratulations! I'm still trying to get around to meet all of my fellow campaigners. (Thanks for posting on my blog)<br />This is the link to my very first blog post ever, back in 2007. http://marcyhowes.blogspot.com/2007/09/my-honey-and-me.htmlMarcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00336729074703850201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-30783242428646693812011-09-04T19:48:39.627-07:002011-09-04T19:48:39.627-07:00What a great first post, mine was something like 3...What a great first post, mine was something like 3,000 words and counting, it was worse than it sounds. If that's possible.<br />I am in your Campaign group YA #13, just stopping by to say hello!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14556806194192653074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-62529896094970390072011-09-03T17:47:00.762-07:002011-09-03T17:47:00.762-07:00Here is my link. Wrote it early this morning but f...Here is my link. Wrote it early this morning but forgot to pop over and post in the comments til now,<br /><br />http://clickerbug.wordpress.com/2011/09/03/as-seen-through-a-recycled-glass/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-36346663771026676822011-09-03T16:06:16.817-07:002011-09-03T16:06:16.817-07:00Hi Jessica *waves*, I am green with envy of your w...Hi Jessica *waves*, I am green with envy of your weekend... send some very warm sun down here to kiwiland. <br />This is a real neat idea and have did/done it... here's my link http://thepatientdreamer.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/first-post-or-favourite-post/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-7366356564410504052011-09-03T12:59:03.507-07:002011-09-03T12:59:03.507-07:00Thanks so much everyone for playing and for the fo...Thanks so much everyone for playing and for the follows! Enjoying my weekend in the sun, but can't wait to get back and read your posts on Tuesday!Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-20262600345826068352011-09-03T11:12:00.479-07:002011-09-03T11:12:00.479-07:00Great idea for the Campaign. And congrats on your...Great idea for the Campaign. And congrats on your publishing contract - to only wait two weeks to hear, that is amazing. It must be a totally awesome book! (based on the title it sounds like it too) :)Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17323788304469008867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-59926156542789911382011-09-03T06:29:24.758-07:002011-09-03T06:29:24.758-07:00Great idea! When I went back to find my first post...Great idea! When I went back to find my first post, I realized that I've been doing this particular blog for almost exactly one year now. That was a cool realization!<br /><br />Here's my link: http://elizabethannewrites.com/2011/09/03/first-post-the-past/Beth Stilbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10599767764125204077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-17261065024416551522011-09-03T05:18:15.032-07:002011-09-03T05:18:15.032-07:00Thanks for running these!Thanks for running these!Kurt Hartwighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857036723957923656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-18589449820535218372011-09-02T20:39:43.203-07:002011-09-02T20:39:43.203-07:00What a fabulous idea! Okay, I need to go back to m...What a fabulous idea! Okay, I need to go back to my blog and see what my very first post was. I am rather scared.Susan Oloierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07311938400999953443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-90488659734086961192011-09-02T13:48:30.205-07:002011-09-02T13:48:30.205-07:00I just moved to my new blog, so my first post was ...I just moved to my new blog, so my first post was back in July. In it, I stated my resolution to write more. It... sadly hasn't happened yet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-51972837867521567302011-09-02T11:38:14.217-07:002011-09-02T11:38:14.217-07:00Thanks so much for sharing! I can't wait to re...Thanks so much for sharing! I can't wait to read your posts....I'm on the road to Vegas for Labor Day weekend so I am posting this comment from my phone. Blog with you soon!Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-30298068584010619172011-09-02T09:44:37.586-07:002011-09-02T09:44:37.586-07:00I've been blogging since 2009. This year, I de...I've been blogging since 2009. This year, I decided to be more focused and wrote every day for the first month and a half. This is the first one I did this year: <br /><br />http://stacysjensen.blogspot.com/2011/01/list-filled-new-year.html<br /><br />I typically write or focus on a writing issue — memoir in progress or Picture Books.Stacy S. Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09646270238659432058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-22099659628999813052011-09-02T09:35:31.882-07:002011-09-02T09:35:31.882-07:00Great idea. This if my favorite.
Editing: Gettin...Great idea. This if my favorite.<br /><br /><br />Editing: Getting Rid of the Excess<br /><br />(Picture on your left hand corner)Yes, that is I. And I don’t look like that now. My bum is a little wider. And that six-pack is somewhere. LOL!<br /><br />Let’s talk editing. The first draft seems to flow and you add every word possible on the white screen that stares back at you. Flowery sentences, an over abundance of look, she stared, and the ever famous—she cocked a brow. I think we’re all guilty of putting too much junk in the first draft.<br /><br /><br />When I ran track, I was somewhat plump and my coach so graciously said you have the engine of a Ferrari, but the body of an over-sized Mercedes. Um, was that a compliment? Yeah, I was overweight for track standards ,and I understood what he was saying. I needed to get rid of the chub, jiggles, the little belly. It’s okay to be a little overweight during the off season, but not all year.<br /><br /><br />The same is true for writing. With the first draft, write away and have diarrhea of the words.(That's your off season) Pour your heart into your MS.<br /><br /><br />But.<br /><br /><br />When it is time to edit, you have to lose the excess and put on muscle. Muscle is good. Very good. That’s what makes you faster, stronger, and it might get you a whistle or two. I'm just saying. ;)<br /><br /><br />Can you say the same thing with one sentence or do you need two? Does the verb you’re using pack the punch you want? Do you have words that you use way too much? Too many clichés? Are you using—that, as, then, was, be, too often? Are you too wordy? Are you repeating yourself? Does it flow well? Do you have too much back-story? Is the dialogue moving the plot forward? Do you have obvious holes in your plot? Are you characters believable? Is the story moving too fast or too slow. <br /><br />You need to get your WIP in shape. That’s not easy. Some of us like our jiggles. But you can’t keep it in your novel. You have to be deliberate and cut away some of the things you love or to put it another way: Drop It Like It's Hot.<br /><br /><br />You need to get your book ready for competition because whether you like it or not—it’s a competition. Agents are looking at query letters and manuscripts all the time. <br /><br /><br />See what works and what doesn't. Losing the weight didn't guarantee that I would make the Olympic team. It took a lot of hard wok. Editing is hard work and at times, it isn't fun. I didn't like getting up early in the morning or vomiting on the side of the red mondo track because my coach gave me a hard workout. But I trained hard. Why? I had a goal. And it paid off.<br /><br />Do you have to look like the picture above? No. But your novel should. So put on those runners and stay the course. And remember--enjoy the ride.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-650043149805650106.post-89850386506995968912011-09-02T09:08:10.844-07:002011-09-02T09:08:10.844-07:00What a great idea. My first post will be on my blo...What a great idea. My first post will be on my blog post haste. What if my regular days are Saturday and Tuesday?<br />Loved that you are getting published. Congrats.<br />That's why I started blogging, too.<br />Oh, I have an appt scheduled and so my blog post will have to wait.<br />Check back later, ClarAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com